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haiku 0201

without words

july 21, 2023

notes

This is a three-line haiku with two blank lines, because "without words".

It started as a three-line haiku with only one blank line.

without words
my life is meaningless--

However, I thought that was too many words for a haiku that starts with the line "without words".

Then I thought that was also too many words, so I wrote the following three-line haiku.



I like that a lot! Is it too over-the-top?

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