the way of haiku.

haiku 0663

if our world were ruledby peace and understandingwould we then crave war?

january 11, 2025

notes

I originally wrote this as a 17-syllable sentence, also called an American Sentence, a form developed by Allen Ginsberg.

If our world were ruled by peace and understanding, would we then crave war?

It works very well that way, but I like also as a haiku (or probably better classified as a senryu).

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